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Orbi gives teacher-style feedback in clear, warm language that parents and children can understand.
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Sample Orbi report
Maya is Growing
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Score
24/36
Snapshot
Maya's story answers the title and has a clear beginning, problem and ending. To move towards the next band, the most important scene needs more actions and feelings so the reader can experience the danger with the character.
Biggest opportunity
Slow down the climax
Next milestone
Achieving
What–How–Why™ Diagnostic
WHAT
StrongThe story is complete and easy to follow.
HOW
DevelopingThe most important moment moves too quickly.
WHY
DevelopingThe lesson is clear, but the feeling can land more strongly.
Grammar correction
You wrote
“he quickly run to the door”
Correct
“he quickly ran to the door”
One improved paragraph
Original
I ran to help him. He was scared. I called my mother.
Improved
My hands trembled as I knelt beside him. “Don't move,” I whispered, reaching for my mother's number.
Orbi shows one stronger version, then explains the skill used.
Rewrite challenge
Rewrite the most important five seconds of the story. Add one action, one sound and one feeling.
Why Orbi Feels Different
A report that feels like a thoughtful teacher read the composition.
Built with teacher judgement
Orbi was created by a creative writing teacher to give feedback that feels specific, useful and fair.
Guided by PSLE-style expectations
Orbi checks story relevance, picture use, development, grammar, vocabulary and flow.
Powered by Orbi's What–How–Why™ Framework
Orbi helps young writers understand what happened in the story, how it was shown, and why it matters to the reader.
What Orbi gives after every composition
Why this mark? What next?
Most composition feedback tells children what is wrong, but not always why the mark stayed where it did or what would move it to the next band.
Orbi breaks the report down clearly: what is already working, what is holding the score back, and the most immediate action to take next.
So parents are not left guessing, and children know what to improve in the next piece of writing.
The score becomes clearer
Parents see what the number means.
The next step feels possible
One clear focus replaces a long list of corrections.
The child stays encouraged
Feedback sounds like a thoughtful coach, not a cold score sheet.
Most AI feedback sounds polished but generic.
Orbi gives feedback with careful attention to your child's current writing level, then focuses on what will help most next.
Generic feedback
Improve your ending.
It tells the student what is weak, but not how to fix it.
Orbi report
The ending works. The extra final sentence makes it feel repeated.
The student knows what to keep, what to remove, and how to improve it.
Want to understand how Orbi gives different feedback for different writers?
See the system behind OrbiInside every report
A clear writing report your child can learn from.
Orbi explains the score, shows what is working, highlights the next skill to improve, and gives one improved paragraph as a guide.
Score explained clearly
A strength worth keeping
The biggest thing to improve
A before-and-after rewrite
One next writing goal
Feedback matched to your child's next step.
Orbi does not give every child the same advice. It looks at the writing first, then focuses on what will help most next: grammar and story flow for some children, stronger description and endings for others.
Built with real student writing
Orbi learns from the mistakes children actually make.
Orbi is being improved with real upper-primary writing patterns so the feedback stays clear, useful and suitable for home revision.
Ready when the story is ready.
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